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    dots Submission Name: your secret eardots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsyour secret eardots
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    i've been fondling the listless birds
    of my water
    surreal in my bright ascent
    like only the mornings clouds accrue

    and still,
    as i am now,
    unmoving in my perfect thunder
    my islands unwind
    a splendid haunting in the flame

    love may be heartless
    but it still requires its own

    in the breathable air of my mind
    where the purity of fingers
    & the softness spoils
    there is a secret queen of ice i hide
    though not for long
    for treasures must unfold
    ancient harmonies
    lost in the modern chatter

    i am old
    & wanting
    for i am here
    & eternal
    the sunscape of my body
    unwrapping on your bedpost
    like a squall
    and in the technicolour of my prawn-like paw
    my many whispers open skylight futures
    & passions that beat like my stolen away heart anew

    lover let me sing to you
    an inner chorus that you've heard before
    the one that for the first time
    you're hearing
    in your secret ear




    Submitted on 2007-06-09 22:00:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh my gosh, that is soo awesome. i love it! it's like the best thing i've ever read! some things i didnt really understand but in a smooth going sense of way. i love it!!! it's awesome. hope to see another!
    ~*alexis*~
    | Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow that was pretty much the best thing I've ever read on this site. Every word was great.

    the sunscape of my body
    unwrapping on your bedpost


    good stuff.
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by justwantedtosay | [ Reply to This ]


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