Description: Ok i was at tumbling and i began to think about the kids who never failed at anything in tumbling and how it seemed to cheapen their success and what would happen if life in general was just like that
If you asked me, I'd say that it'd be bloody great! LOL
I loathe difficulties, especially those that do not let you sleep at night or those that push you away from your dear ones/friends, so to speak.
I guess that life would be less complicated without pitfalls but at the same time I surmise that without them we would be or get bored and then become nerds or robots with a dull smile on our faces.
Dunno I think I have mixed feeling on that account.
As for the piece itself, I'd say that it's stern and to the point. It's very neat and quite effective.
One suggestion would be to avoid describing it too much so as to let the reader gets their conclusions or interpretations.
Submission Name: Success
