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    dots Submission Name: Uptown Girldots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 16/48/48
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 102
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    dotsUptown Girldots
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    Uptown girl
    Looking out through polished one-way glass
    Watching every moment slowly pass
    And fade until it’s gone
    No one sees her sitting quietly
    Confinment--her one priority
    They don’t know her enough
    To know there’s something wrong,
    The world is watching her but no one cares to think
    She might want something more
    Just a little room to breathe?
    She could fall apart inside
    But that perfect smile should never waver...

    Uptown girl
    They all see her with her hip new clothes
    Not a care, and so nobody knows
    What its like
    Stuck in the middle of her uptown world
    Just as fake as all her porcelain dolls
    Sitting there
    Lonely bags and shoes to break her fall
    Everything she wants thrown at her feet
    What more could there be?
    They dont know
    Just Judging her, and wishing
    Who wouldnt want to live that way?
    What a forced duplicity
    She must wake up to star treatments everyday
    When all she ever does
    Is wish her perfect life away…

    There she waits
    On the top of that sunny-side hill
    Just as lonely as if she were frozen still
    And not a soul to sympathize
    Full of laughter unreleased
    Imagining what it is like
    To have a life
    To break the glass
    And join the crowd she’s always been hidden from
    Uptown girl...






    Submitted on 2007-06-10 08:57:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg this is awesome, i love it! hope to see some quality writes like this! it shows how people just dont understand others who think they're happy with stuff they have!!! ttyl man!
    ~*alexis*~
    | Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]



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