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    dots Submission Name: im a bakerdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1285



    Description:
       its not finished. i just wrote them up the other day. i put them all together cuz none of them was finish by themselves and they still arent done. i dont care if you dont like it. im not done


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    dotsim a bakerdots
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    i feel like a baker
    im a doe maker
    im a ho shaker
    you just a faker
    you see i could shape you
    like a doll
    like a dog
    like a bitch
    im the fog
    you listen to my song
    like you wanna hit my bong
    but its all about my blunts
    and my fresh word cuts
    this bitch is on my butt
    but she's just a dumb cunt
    tryin to get fucked
    bitch yous a rippa
    i got her with my clippas
    i had to hit that bitch up
    cuz shes just a dumb ho
    but i gotta make that doe
    and turn it into bread
    bitch gimmie some head
    dont play like you dead
    you heard what i said

    shit in the toilet
    still go dumb
    you know that i got it
    you can have some
    you can have fun
    wash your hands
    and walk out the bathroom
    gotta stay clean
    listen to them dumb tunes
    my face looks mean
    but its just my bling
    its just my gleam
    its just my team

    you think im soft
    but bitch i stay hard
    i fuck with them dollas
    fuck your plastic cards
    i do paper
    bitch yous a hater
    bitch you cant take it
    you cant even make it




    Submitted on 2007-06-10 12:33:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      what have i said before??? you have got mad skill girl. i could make this flow perfectly. i like it. maybe you really are a [censored] baker. damn. i believe it.






    A Huge Fan,
    RoseKisses
    | Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by ohso_cool | [ Reply to This ]


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