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    dots Submission Name: Thinking of you!!!dots
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    Author: black rose13
    ASL Info:    14/f/where do I live?
    Elite Ratio:    1.27 - 137/93/38
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 166
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 198



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       I may add more to this I'm not sure. I was just thinking about someone. he knows who he is.


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    dotsThinking of you!!!dots
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    When I think of you I can't help but smile.
    when I think of you I hate knowing how far away you are.
    When I think of you I can't help but wonder....
    Will we ever meet?




    Submitted on 2007-06-10 16:31:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, i may be wrong, but i did not enjoy it. because it was and i felt that you were just talking to a person, for me you did not write poetry in this, so well do not take as a rude person, that is what i think about it. try to make it better with more symbols. so keep writing
    and have a nice day
    i hope you can do it better next time.
    and if you have time please take a look to my writings.
    peace and love
    Victor
    | Posted on 2007-09-13 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it. It remind me of my current relationship.
    | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      awww...it's so sweet. you have a talent for love poetry. nice write
    Saracasticmute :)
    | Posted on 2007-06-28 00:00:00 | by sarcasticmute | [ Reply to This ]
      i love it! it makes me think of my someone special...or specials (no i dont cheat on my bf! lol! my fam him and friend!! ) love it! keep writing!!
    ~*alexis*~
    | Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]



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