When I think of you I can't help but smile.
when I think of you I hate knowing how far away you are.
When I think of you I can't help but wonder....
Will we ever meet?
| Well, i may be wrong, but i did not enjoy it. because it was and i felt that you were just talking to a person, for me you did not write poetry in this, so well do not take as a rude person, that is what i think about it. try to make it better with more symbols. so keep writing|
and have a nice day
i hope you can do it better next time.
and if you have time please take a look to my writings.
peace and love
|| Posted on 2007-09-13 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ] || I love it. It remind me of my current relationship.||| Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ] || awww...it's so sweet. you have a talent for love poetry. nice write|
|| Posted on 2007-06-28 00:00:00 | by sarcasticmute | [ Reply to This ] || i love it! it makes me think of my someone special...or specials (no i dont cheat on my bf! lol! my fam him and friend!! ) love it! keep writing!! |
|| Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ] |