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Hopeless Mess

Author: truthbetold
ASL Info:    20-f
Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38 /45 /33
Words: 60
Class/Type: Poetry /
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Hopeless Mess

A lost soul
A broken heart
Shattered dreams that fell apart

Serenity, courage
And wisdom gone
Except the troubles i fell upon

A hard past revealed
And the visions i see
Are just too brutal for you to believe

The reflected image
And the shoulder to cry
Disappeared before me and left me to die

Submitted on 2007-06-10 18:33:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow. dae. that is all I can say right now I'm in aww with this piece.
| Posted on 2007-06-11 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
  first upon not apon and revealed not revieled. good work overall. this isnt a spelling contest anyways. i think i commented on some of your other work. you're name is familiar. but i comment all day to set example. continue to write. you are good at it. i look forward to reading more by you

| Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]

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