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    dots Submission Name: The Heartdots
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    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 790
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 340



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    dotsThe Heartdots
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    a heart is a symbol of love
    when the heart breaks, it dies

    mending a heart takes time
    longer than you think

    the heart spreads out the most fragile emotion
    you need to take care of it

    and soon you'll find love again
    your heart will be back together again




    Submitted on 2007-06-10 18:50:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you posted this under poetry. i dont hink of it as a poem. more of a thought. not to say that this thought is not true, because it is so. but i think it should be under something else. sorry that i cannot be any help as to what else so you should probably just ignore me. but hey, if you can get a chance can you comment of These Words on my page. thanks. and awesome thought. i agree!!!




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    | Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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