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    dots Submission Name: A Choice to Makedots

    Author: Valedia
    ASL Info:    25/female/austin
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/1/6
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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    dotsA Choice to Makedots

    I look at the world,
    But does the world see me,
    I've lost myself along the way,
    I can't seem to find what I'm looking for,
    So I contiue this quest of self discovery,
    Never quite sure which road I'll take next,
    I'm young,
    Which is my only saving grace,
    Time isn't measured when your young,
    For those who grow up too fast,
    Only know that time is of the essence,
    I'll never be what you expect me to be,
    The road I'll take is scary,
    Fear resides in my soul,
    Nestled in like an egg in a birds nest,
    You see fear doesn't have me,
    I hold fear,
    There are only two options,
    Let it go,
    Or die with unfulfilled dreams.

    Submitted on 2007-06-10 18:52:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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