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    dots Submission Name: Blood Rosesdots

    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsBlood Rosesdots

    Blood roses
    blood roses
    your thorns are
    so full in bloom
    deadly just by holding you
    I'm bleeding so deeply
    I'm cleaning it descretly
    yet it comes out
    as I give a shout

    It pours to the floor
    wondering how much more
    blood do you need
    roses of greed
    I want it all to end
    but yet it begins
    death by a rose
    I should have known

    Blood roses
    dead roses
    with thorns so
    I lay at your side
    for I have died
    no more bleeding
    for I kept on giving
    fueled your thirst
    with my blood first
    then my soul you have taken
    a rose forsaken

    Submitted on 2007-06-10 22:46:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      &#8220;the thorns are atrocious&#8221; And in this poem the roses represents life. Life as a rose is beautiful, but as a rose, life has thorns in it as well... Hoped I explained the meaning of the poem well enough. Thanx for reading it, peace and stay safe...
    | Posted on 2007-07-13 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good, im trying to figure out though what the roses mean. if it stands for romance or love than i can see the view point. Interesting how you say they look atrocious yet you pick them up as if they are desirable . The image given by this poem is very pleasent in a dark sort of way. hope to see more. very good job
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Seraphim X | [ Reply to This ]

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