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    dots Submission Name: I'll Bleed Youdots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 862/761/201
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 182
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1027



    Description:
       ...if you say the word 'bleed' long enough, it completely loses it's meaning and sounds REALLY funny. Like, super funny. Bleed. Bleed. Bleeeeeed. 8D


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    dotsI'll Bleed Youdots
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    Back hits the ground and I bleed you out,
    Giving back to a dry earth.
    You told me how you loved me,
    I denied you,
    Even as I told you I did, too.

    But none of that matters now,
    When the sun rises on Christmas Day.
    Snow turns to rain,
    And love to pain,
    As I dry my veins.

    I'll bleed you out here,
    Every word you ever spoke to me,
    Every day that made me
    Love you,
    I'll give back to this lost world.
    They need you more than you need me,
    They need you free.

    Honor's more important
    Than a little girl in a lost world,
    They need a hero,
    You fit the bill.
    I was planning this all along,
    Before I loved you,
    Before it hurt,
    But it's too late for regretting now,
    You struck your kill.
    I made my vow.

    I'll bleed you out of my beating heart
    And set you free,
    To make a new start.




    Submitted on 2007-06-11 07:15:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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