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The Dance of Autumn

Author: Roula
ASL Info:    18/female
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Perhaps a bit premature in timing.....

The Dance of Autumn

Autumn leaves don’t have anything to hold,
The trees are letting go.
Slowly swirling in the air-
Dancing- they hit the ground.

The leaves crunch below my feet,
Making noise so apprehensively.

The wind caresses my face,
Suddenly stopping without warning,
The dancing ceases-
Summer, is coming to it’s end.

Submitted on 2007-06-11 17:41:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I always write a lot of inspirational pieces about the seasons and in autumn I see the death of that beauty as life for something else - the nutrients, in death, it provides is again, life giving.

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