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    dots Submission Name: The Dance of Autumndots
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    Author: Roula
    ASL Info:    18/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 46/64/45
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Dance of Autumndots
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    Autumn leaves donít have anything to hold,
    The trees are letting go.
    Slowly swirling in the air-
    Dancing- they hit the ground.

    The leaves crunch below my feet,
    Making noise so apprehensively.

    The wind caresses my face,
    Suddenly stopping without warning,
    The dancing ceases-
    Summer, is coming to itís end.




    Submitted on 2007-06-11 17:41:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I always write a lot of inspirational pieces about the seasons and in autumn I see the death of that beauty as life for something else - the nutrients, in death, it provides is again, life giving.

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    | Posted on 2007-06-11 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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