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    Author: Cricket
    ASL Info:    19/F/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 81/51/27
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 693
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 515



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    dotsbroken?dots
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    I won’t do what you as you say

    So do as you please

    I’ll never do it right

    And its you who Hates me

    You thought I was what you wanted

    I was never was what you needed

    I will never like you

    Only you will like me

    My mind won’t “get straight”

    So I guess you should leave

    When you said “broken beyond repair”

    I just smiled cause you know I don’t care...




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