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    dots Submission Name: Tongue twisterdots
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    Author: Clarkie
    ASL Info:    18/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.33 - 101/76/36
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 813
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 220



    Description:
       I've got no idea what the heck this is. I just got the play on 'barefoot and pregnant' stuck in my head and needed to do something with it. This is the product of about thirty seconds, not including the time to figure out the barefoot and pregnant metaphor.


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    dotsTongue twisterdots
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    Barefoot and
    pregnant
    With pauses
    Fits and starts
    Shits and giggles
    Why do I even try?
    Speaking to you
    Jumping through
    flaming hoops
    So dangerous




    Submitted on 2007-06-12 00:55:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Not a clue. I read this and I don't have a clue what you're talking about. Help me out? I could do with some enlightenment today :) exams make me think too much...

    The 'jumping through flaming hoops' I'll take to refer to trying to talk to this person. Anyway, you've made me feel lost. I'm gonna go wander around aimlessly, trying to figure it out :p

    Thanks for the read.
    | Posted on 2007-06-12 00:00:00 | by Predator | [ Reply to This ]


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