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    dots Submission Name: I told you everythingdots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 190/178/112
    Words: 432
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 114
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2705



    Description:
       a song about love


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    dotsI told you everythingdots
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    Coming to terms is a method to turn me
    Inside out
    All that you touch is becoming hope in your eyes
    Does it have to be so hard to come by
    Cause I told you that I have it bad for you
    I told you last night.
    And, yes I have the comfort & warmth to
    hold your heart, that it's hard to want her.

    chorus:
    It was going to happen, sooner or later
    Baby, you that I love is hardly saying a word
    If you're safe then, but I am suffering
    Keep me guessing...
    One kind word is what I'm missing these days
    So please tell me
    So it's better, I told you everything
    I told you everything
    I finally burst into what was holding me hostage
    This lovely passion
    This lovely fear is out of my mouth

    Oh, we play so dirty
    Hurry, you say to me
    Cause it's you & my pain
    the word is out
    the word is out
    From North to South
    You don't want to say
    That you love me
    Besides the other things you hide
    You're lovely
    So lovely

    chorus:
    It was going to happen, sooner or later
    Baby, you that I love is hardly saying a word
    If you're safe then, but I am suffering
    Keep me guessing...
    One kind word is what I'm missing these days
    So please tell me
    So it's better, I told you everything
    I told you everything
    I finally burst into what was holding me hostage
    This lovely passion
    This lovely fear is out of my mouth


    There had to be a day like this
    That I could hardly hit & miss
    And, little did I know that I would
    tell you so much
    And now you know
    So what are you gonna do now?
    Holding me ransom my baby
    So handsome
    Dismantle my feathers
    I love you forever
    Don't be so clever
    Join me

    t was going to happen, sooner or later
    Baby, you that I love is hardly saying a word
    If you're safe then, but I am suffering
    Keep me guessing...
    One kind word is what I'm missing these days
    So please tell me
    So it's better, I told you everything
    I told you everything
    I finally burst into what was holding me hostage
    This lovely passion
    This lovely fear is out of my mouth


    Hostage for you
    Hostage for you
    for so long
    oh for so long
    Hostage for you
    Hostage for you
    for so long...







    Submitted on 2007-06-12 09:01:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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