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    dots Submission Name: There's nothing wrong with me, I'm an eqdots
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    Author: EbonyBlood
    ASL Info:    14/F/Can.
    Elite Ratio:    3.7 - 79/79/73
    Words: 316
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1186
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1803



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       For some reason I felt I needed to say this, and as I continued everything just poured out. I couldn't even stop to change the music.


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    dotsThere's nothing wrong with me, I'm an eqdots
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    I'd like you to see that this is the way I think
    This is the way I believe
    I don't wish for you to hate me for what I look like
    For where I live
    For what color my skin is

    How is it you get to be so great, who decided you'd be the new lord in this town?
    Why is it that everywhere I go, you stare?
    That everything I touch you throw out?

    I don't have a disease, I won't hurt you!
    Please don't look at me that way
    I'm just as nice as you
    I'm just as creative as you

    I'm an equal to you
    And to everyone else, there is nothing wrong with me
    I'm just the same are, You, Him, and Her
    Don't ignore me because I look slightly different from you

    When a white cat sees a black cat, they do not hate each other, they try to learn who each other is..
    So why is it, when I look into your eyes and beg for friendship you turn away and snort at my cries

    There is nothing wrong with me, I am an equal to you!
    Why don't you see that! Why don't your parents teach you, I just the same as you!
    I have eyes, a nose, ears, and a mouth!

    I may not dress the same, Believe in the same thing, and I may not have the same color skin, or eyes.
    But, why do I deserve to be judged by that?
    Why are Mexicans 'dirty'?
    Why are Canadians 'stupid'?
    Why are Japanese 'Weird'?

    Why don't you see these things I try and explain!
    Maybe it is you who is dirty, YOU who is stupid and you who is Weird!
    Because you can't open your eyes and see,

    I'm an equal to you!




    Submitted on 2007-06-12 15:11:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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