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le loup garou

Author: _Phoenix
ASL Info:    18/F/FL
Elite Ratio:    4.56 - 46 /31 /21
Words: 122
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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i am in love with a book called Blood and Chocolate, by Annette Curtis Klause.
the transformation described here is something similar to what Vivian and her pack might experience around the time of Thunder Moon.

le loup garou

let it enfold you
sweet starlight
and the beautiful moon.
transformation comes swift and sweet
you feel your heart start to echo its beat
the galaxy feels like rewinding its course
the Earth is cut off from its energy source
spine starts to crunch, teeth start to lengthen
hair turns thick, nails start to strengthen.
moonlight eats your human skin
burns like acid, paper thin
night eats light, and all you never said
you're a creature of beauty and a thing of dread
with blackest fur and radar ears
beautiful, but one to fear.
with claws that rip and fangs that kill
you don't want to, but if needed, you will.
let it enfold you
sweet starlight
and the beautiful moon.

Submitted on 2007-06-12 16:43:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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