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    dots Submission Name: Chills In The Evening (Tom Fletcher/James Bourne)dots
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    Author: Lord Bane
    ASL Info:    24/M/Isle of Wight, UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 40/81/50
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 925
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 839



    Description:
       I wanted to post this song cos this is exactly how I felt after me and my ex split up, and I suspect (although I may be wrong) that a lot of people might relate to it. Its also written by my two favourite songwriters.


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    dotsChills In The Evening (Tom Fletcher/James Bourne)dots
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    Being with you is all that I needed
    But I dont know why I was too blind to see it
    But now you're gone and I need you here tonight.

    Chorus
    You know that I can't sleep cos I'm terrified
    It feels like I'm falling down really fast inside
    And I'm wishing the night away
    These chills in the evening, they won't go away.

    And sometimes it feels like I can't go on living
    There's not much to take when you've done all the giving
    But now you're gone and I need you here tonight

    Chorus

    And now I need to find a way to stop this pain from getting stronger
    And I just can't explain
    I don't understand why you left me here

    (Repeat chorus till fade)




    Submitted on 2007-06-13 09:21:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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