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    Author: John Jay Junior
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 6/15/5
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    Hey kids!
    Today something really, really exciting happened to me. Namely, a dipshit referrering to itself as 'black angel' posted on my page! Here it is in all its glory:

    You need to knock it off. I was reading one of my friends story thing, and I saw your comment about how bad he writes and her needs to leave and stop poisoning the minds of young writers. You know, it's the the smartest thing to get on the wrong foot with me, becuase you might just loose that foot, so back off.
    -Black Angel

    Now, I'm not sure whether 'black angel' is an idiot who has an overwhelming need to lash out at objectivity, or just an idiot. Judging by the writings she's posted, both seem to fit. More importantly, I wanted to share with you all the absolute hilarity of this piece of trailer park trash making a physical threat at me! I wonder if she grasps how the internet actually works? I also wonder if she grasps the concept of 'critiques'? It is truly a shame that the shining achievement of the internet has to be polluted with this festering moron, the likes of which always pop up wherever you surf




    Submitted on 2007-06-13 12:03:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Why are you even on this site other than to [censored] on everyone's writing? I think people would appreciate your critiques more if you were a little nicer and more tactful about it. You don't have to be an [censored] to tell someone they need some improvement. Stop trying to be all ~*controversial*~ and offer some REAL critiques.


    Elle
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by GetFighted | [ Reply to This ]
      Before you go round mouthing off about people, get your facts straight. She was trying to stand up for me. You want to have a go at someone, have a go at me, she's just being a mate.
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]
      I was simply making a point on the way you comment. What you put is not a critique it is an insult. A critique is a comment of which helps the writer to make their writings better, unlike your insult where you tell them to leave and stop poisoning the minds of young writers. As for me saying if you get off onthe wrong foot with me, you might loose it, that is called a figure of speech. You should know what that is, seeing how your writings are above every elses.

    _Kayame_
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Black Angel | [ Reply to This ]

    This user is banned.

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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