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    dots Submission Name: Full ofdots
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    Author: the_truth
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 25/21/21
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 125
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 860



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    dotsFull ofdots
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    1st of June 2007


    Full of

    Full of Wrath
    For what you did
    -picking such a damned ‘path’
    There is no way, God forbid

    Full of Ardor
    Something you could give
    -all I need is more
    With this I can somehow forgive

    Full of Grief
    Because of this end
    -no time for any disbelief
    I can never try to comprehend

    Full of Lust
    Such an amazing reason
    -kneed is no longer a must
    No time you are the season

    Full of Regret
    I should not contain
    -something I will never forget
    For now ‘one nothing’ to gain

    Full of Nonentity
    It will never disappear
    -this is my new identity
    No longer even a single tear







    Submitted on 2007-06-14 00:56:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow... sounds like something simliar to my style or something i'd write anyway.. i like to piece a lot. it makes me want to keep reading, always wanting to see more the next line... great job on this and thanks for posting..

    ~!*Jackie*!~
    | Posted on 2007-06-15 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      first i like the angel


    i like this piece a lot. continue to write. it helps a lot of us. keep posting. i look forward to reading more by you soon. i enjoyed this piece. keep up the amazingly awesome work.





    tina
    | Posted on 2007-06-14 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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