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    dots Submission Name: The "Nothing" in Her Closetdots
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    Author: DeadPoetz
    ASL Info:    19/ Female/ Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 9/23/9
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Story/Childrens
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       To be continued...

    Inspired by my little sister.


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    dotsThe "Nothing" in Her Closetdots
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    This is the story of the little girl who was afraid of the "Nothing" in her closet.

    Every night, before the little girl went to bed, she always made sure that the closet door is closed.
    Whenever her sisters would open the closet door in the middle of the night, she would always get out of bed just to close it again.

    The little girl is not afraid of the monsters that might come out of the closet. Because she
    did not believe in monsters. Instead, she is afraid of the "Nothing" in her closet.

    She does not know what the "Nothing" is. Or if it has shape or color. Or if it is big or small.
    You see, that's the thing, she knows nothing about the "Nothing" in her closet. And that is why she is afraid of it.

    To be continued...




    Submitted on 2007-06-14 07:53:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh....kay....

    Afraid of a "Nothing"? "Nothing"s don't exist, well, because they are nothing.

    Interesting idea though. Usually there is always something there to scare the kid. But this time there is nothing there and the kid is scared.

    Love it. Very unique and funny.
    | Posted on 2007-06-15 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      Simple and creepy. To be not afraid of monsters or other scary things that go bump in the night but instead what is not seen, not heard, and not felt. I, nothing.

    It's going to be continued? Huzzah.

    sorry bout the shortness ;P
    cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-06-15 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      It's incredibly simple, (I must say, not extremely well written, o.k.,) but amazingly expresses a huge point. People are afraid of what they don't know about. What they can't understand. They want nothing to do with it and try to ignore it....nothing is frighting. When I was little I got lost in the mall. (Haven't we all?) I knew NOTHING about the mall, the mall meant NOTHING to me, I wanted to buy NOTHING, had bought NOTHING.....all I wanted was my parents. Whether or not the only reason was that they were my ride home. (I ended up going to the main office and paging the entire mall for them. Every floor. Literally. it was one of those mega-malls. It wasn't the first time. My mother was not pleased.) Nothing can be scary, and maddening.....I think it's a little short for a 'to be continued...' I look forward to the rest of the story though.
    -Katriana
    | Posted on 2007-06-14 00:00:00 | by dancer-of-words | [ Reply to This ]
      This is probably something everyone can relate to. The monsters under their bed, or in their cupboards. It's a very ancient fear.
    It was very simply written so I'm guessing was aimed at children and this will be something they can relate to.
    The only problem I found was that it ended very quickly. I know it's a 'to be continued', but I feel you should have written more all the same for the first installment.
    I loved the picture you put in with it. It helps add to the story well and the child-like simplicity of it fits in with the story well.
    | Posted on 2007-06-14 00:00:00 | by AteMyBackpack | [ Reply to This ]



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