It's got a bit of a rhythm to it, I think. Could be longer, though; I wonder if there's enough of a story to it even as I applaud word choice. The last line bothers me slightly, but...
I feel like an idiot: you know how stalk alerts for posts and journals appear in with PMs? I accidentally hit Delete one too many times and took out a message from you. I'm sorry, but maybe you could resend?
ooh. i like this. its good. its like, the music could say what the mime cannot. good work. it makes me think you could be a mime to understand this. i like it. keep up the awesome work.
Submission Name: mime
