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    dots Submission Name: Maskdots
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    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Yet again another old one.


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    dotsMaskdots
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    You wouldn't listen if I told you so why do you even ask,
    You'll never see my pain because I wont remove my mask.
    You say you want to know why I cry myself to sleep,
    But i'll never tell you because you'll eternally weep.
    You want to know why I cut myself but its because of you,
    So telling you why is something that I just cannot do.
    You want to know why I lie but its to protect you from pain,
    But every time I do it's just more scars that I gain.
    You want to know alot of things but I cannot tell you them all,
    If I did then with me you would eternally fall.
    I'm trying to protect that from happening so behind my mask I still hide,
    With hope that one day all my pain will subside.
    But until then I will hide behind my mask of lies,
    And try to answer all your questions so that no one cries.




    Submitted on 2007-06-14 12:54:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I totally understand. I've been in many a situation like thixs. I know how it feels and i know it sucs.
    | Posted on 2007-09-13 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      A great sacrifice ur taking,
    and i understand this write,
    sometimes inorder to do something for the best of someone else, we have to suffer inside, puttin on our mask, and lie to the world.

    Bt anyway, that's all part of life, someone out there is putting on a mask because of us aswell,

    So....

    God Bless
    Dennis

    P/S: it got the flow, and a good write :)
    | Posted on 2007-06-16 00:00:00 | by StylerDen | [ Reply to This ]


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