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    dots Submission Name: Forgetdots
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    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This was written back in 7th grade. I was just starting to write then, so it's not that great.


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    dotsForgetdots
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    Forget my name forget my face,
    Forget i was ever in this stupid place.
    Forget all the things we used to do,
    Forget there was ever a me and you.
    Forget all the times we shared,
    Forget that i ever freaking cared.
    Forget everything you said to me
    Forget all the things that will never be.
    Forget all the things we could've done,
    Forget that i thought you were "the one."




    Submitted on 2007-06-14 12:56:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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