Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Forgetdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 555
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 445



    Description:
       This was written back in 7th grade. I was just starting to write then, so it's not that great.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsForgetdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Forget my name forget my face,
    Forget i was ever in this stupid place.
    Forget all the things we used to do,
    Forget there was ever a me and you.
    Forget all the times we shared,
    Forget that i ever freaking cared.
    Forget everything you said to me
    Forget all the things that will never be.
    Forget all the things we could've done,
    Forget that i thought you were "the one."




    Submitted on 2007-06-14 12:56:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    144805

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Linger written by saartha
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Giving written by jjd
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Bond written by saartha
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry