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    dots Submission Name: Your Waydots
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    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsYour Waydots
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    You've got your way and i've got mine,
    You go your way and we'll both be fine.
    We were together but your way tore us apart,
    I wanted to go back out but your way broke my heart.
    You thought your way was right but i thought it was wrong,
    You loved your way so i said so long.
    Your way wont change and neither will mine,
    And to go your way i will forever decline.
    You've got your way and i've got mine,
    You go your way and we'll both be fine.




    Submitted on 2007-06-14 12:57:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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