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Your Way


Author: bloodydreamer27
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Your Way



You've got your way and i've got mine,
You go your way and we'll both be fine.
We were together but your way tore us apart,
I wanted to go back out but your way broke my heart.
You thought your way was right but i thought it was wrong,
You loved your way so i said so long.
Your way wont change and neither will mine,
And to go your way i will forever decline.
You've got your way and i've got mine,
You go your way and we'll both be fine.




Submitted on 2007-06-14 12:57:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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