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27th Of July

Author: bloodydreamer27
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27th Of July

Cutting isn't something you do for fun,
It's relief when you have nowhere to run.
It helps you get rid of all your stress,
And help you stop the never ending guess.
The guess of if he loved you or not,
If hurting you was his devious plot.
You show him the scars to make him feel bad,
But inside you still aching and sad.
You want him back but don't want to get hurt,
Because with every other girl he seems to flirt.
He says he'll never cheat but you know thats a lie,
So you decied to kill yourself on the 27th of July.
When that day comes he'll regret what he did,
And he'll finally show all the feelings he hid.
He'll tell you the truth cause your already dead,
He'll say his finall goodbyes and kiss your forehead.

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