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*Can You Hear Me

Author: Caotic_Disaster
ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447 /349 /148
Words: 72
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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well kind of a rant about my bf....he doesnt always listen to me...

*Can You Hear Me

I love you.
You mean so much to me.
Can you hear me?

Take my hand.
Show me how.
Can you hear me?

Kiss me goodnite,
And when i wake up.
Can you hear me?

Will you listen to my problems?
Will you listen to my fears?
Will you let me know when you need me near?

Submitted on 2007-06-14 14:25:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Nice way to choose to rant my dear, sounds all too familiar to me, they never seem to want to listen to you or even talk to you about what is bugging them. I think it may just be a biproduct of male nature, sad but true. Anyway you already know that I enjoy reading your work so please keep writing pieces for me to read. Sorry I haven't commented in a while, take care hun xx
| Posted on 2007-06-15 00:00:00 | by wilted_flower | [ Reply to This ]

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