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Submission Name: Extravagence dots

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Author:	BusterLILblock
ASL Info:	21/F
Elite Ratio:	3.51 - 452/270/50
Words:	50

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Extravagence dots

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My liss for extravagence has lessened os almost even is gone
But the yearn for the liss is still in the shepards hand
Return to where the grass was brown and didnt grow
For that is where it started and where it will end.
Everything has an end

Submitted on 2007-06-14 17:43:56 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's short but sweet! I liked it very very much :3
| Posted on 2009-06-21 00:00:00 | by minikitty | [ Reply to This ]
  cool write man, this makes me feel, hypocritical to say the least. i hope we all achieve this goal.
| Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by geekyslacker | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this, its short but yet says so much, not to mention the signiffiecients its shows off. Keep writing
| Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by essence of life | [ Reply to This ]
  awwwwwwww nice.

like REALLLY nice mannnnn.

like oh shyt nice.

Grims diggs this yo.

peace
| Posted on 2007-07-02 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
  sweet sickness, this is so your own thing. Only you can write something like this, and still make it work. At least, it's lessened, right? Thanx for your words, peace
| Posted on 2007-07-01 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.