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    dots Submission Name: Relatively Absurddots

    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Nature
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    dotsRelatively Absurddots

    Have not you ever been criss crossed with timeless pointless lifeless questions that would make you want to puke on the questioners mouth and then vomit on head drenching him is spit...

    Or worst, Have you been ever overwhelmed by a feeling of despair and remorse, considering wanting to hurt...

    Just about anyone, who rarely almost indefinably would make you want to wish you were dead!

    Well this is absurd isn't it.. and that why am I calling it relatively absurd.

    Submitted on 2007-06-15 09:53:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmmm....Yes I suppose it is a bit absurd but, it looks like you put quite a bit of though into this. Keep Writing.

    | Posted on 2007-06-15 00:00:00 | by LadyDoragon | [ Reply to This ]

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