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    dots Submission Name: Sorrydots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSorrydots
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    Sorry for all the times I lied.
    Lied to you about my feelings.
    Feelings that I have for you.
    You are my true best friend,
    Friend with great benefits.
    Benefits that I took for granted.
    Granted I do love you for you.
    You gave me life and happiness.
    Happiness I will no longer know.
    Know these feelings are true.
    True, you never once knew.
    Knew the way I really felt for you.
    You will always be my one love.
    Love you always, and I am sorry.




    Submitted on 2007-06-15 18:17:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh My God this poem was written for me. I just went through this in some ways and every way. It describes me and my best friend's (former I guess now) situation so well and I can't believe I just clicked on it to read it. I love it even though it hurts a little remembering, this poem is amazing. You write beautifully and I'm so glad to have had the opportunity to read this, especially now...
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by Realitywarp87 | [ Reply to This ]


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