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    dots Submission Name: Not Myself In The Enddots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNot Myself In The Enddots
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    why does it hurt to hear your name
    why do i cry everytime i think of all the times we spent together
    why does it hurt to sleep at night
    when will i be able to live without you
    when can i deal with all this pain
    when is it ok to find someone new
    when do i forget everything we went through
    what will happen if i choose not to move on
    what will become of me if i hold onto this
    who can help me deal with this
    who can heal the pain i feel
    who can make everything all right
    well the answer is you
    your the only i care about
    your the reason i wake up each day
    you were the reason for the smile on my face
    now im without you im not the same
    now im without you theres only me to blame
    without you its not me people see
    without you its the world against me
    without you my walls are built again
    without you im not myself in the end




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