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    dots Submission Name: You Loved Me Even When I Didnt Love Myselfdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsYou Loved Me Even When I Didnt Love Myselfdots
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    ill never be good enough for you
    never be the one to make you smile
    never get to kiss your lips
    never get to hold you tight
    im not the basic bimbo
    im not gonna act like a slut
    im just gonna try to be me
    but it will never be enough
    i had you but i lost you
    there is only me to blame
    but the way i felt with you
    i will never feel the same
    i could never stay mad at you
    i could never walk away
    all i have is my love for you
    but its not enough
    not enough to make you love me
    not enough to show you care
    cause i just dont believe
    that there are no feelings there
    i know im hard to handle
    i know that im a bitch
    but still you loved me
    even when i didnt love myself




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