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    dots Submission Name: romantic holocaustsdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 550
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    Bytes: 625



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    dotsromantic holocaustsdots
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    & in the scripted sunshine
    i am waking,
    as always,
    with a heart
    of trembling subtlty
    & i am doubtless
    in my belonging

    often,
    in becoming myself
    with every passing second,
    i fall redish
    with a lion grasp
    & the bone of teeth
    at my arrival
    into the mysterious flow
    of my perceptions

    & i love
    & i have loved
    & in doing so
    have opened a heart
    like flowers do

    & live eternally
    off the wet nectar
    of romantic holocausts




    Submitted on 2007-06-16 15:50:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      intense.makes me wonder
    | Posted on 2007-06-16 00:00:00 | by to-wit | [ Reply to This ]


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