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    dots Submission Name: Simply Medots
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    Author: Druecilla
    ASL Info:    18/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 22/26/28
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 523



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    dotsSimply Medots
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    Who am I to think that I belong?
    Who am I to think that these feelings would be gone?
    What were we to do to stop my demise?
    What was anybody to do when the world turned it back on me?
    Who are you to say those hateful things?
    Tell me the reason for you to be the way you are!
    What did I do?
    All I did was try to let the word see me for me...
    When did the world stop looking on the inside and start looking on the outside?
    All I ever wanted to be was Simply ME!




    Submitted on 2007-06-16 18:49:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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