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    dots Submission Name: WONDER, the paintingdots

    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       inspired by painter Alex Grey's "Wonder (Zena Gazing at the Moon)"

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    dotsWONDER, the paintingdots

    innocently gazing at the moon’s seizing of the sky,
    glowing soft upon her own, transparent, celestial body;
    her hair whispers.
    she wonders upward, her tender mouth in a subtle smile;
    her throat is taut,
    as if her voice were out there.
    electricity sizzling around her,
    attaching her to this universe’s obscurity,
    which pulsates with the rythyms of rainbows.
    her spiritual current sends seeds on fire outward.
    drops of diamonds floating, rising from her soul’s intensity.
    in the distance, there are trees, darkened, and their silhouettes are shady,
    compared to the stars flashing in her mind.
    her neural pathways, purple, satiated with the density of blood rushing and rushing and flowing and spinning
    to make interdependencies like compassion does.
    heartbeats throbbing onto a translucent drum.
    her inner vision open,
    weaving and twisting with the moon waves.
    her divine consciousness, gyroscopically extending, dancing and doing aerials,
    as it secretes primordial eggs, to be born in
    the enigma,
    that keeps this child alive.

    Submitted on 2007-06-17 01:03:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is probably better than most of the works on this site because your spelling and grammar are in check. However, it is cliché and wordy.
    | Posted on 2007-06-17 00:00:00 | by eliwhitneyradio | [ Reply to This ]

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