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    dots Submission Name: Slacker (James Bourne)dots
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    Author: Lord Bane
    ASL Info:    24/M/Isle of Wight, UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 40/81/50
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 737
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1573



    Description:
       I decided to put this song up a) because its cheerier than most of the other ones I submitted and b) it has some of the most random name drops I've ever seen. It was written by James Bourne a year or so ago, and is about how a "slacker" he goes to school with ends up with his dream job.


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    dotsSlacker (James Bourne)dots
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    My friend's a computer hacker, but in school everybody said he was a slacker
    He writes science-fiction novels
    He builds whole towns and villages from Cola bottles
    He does equations just for fun
    Eats low-carb ice-cream with his mum
    Sows cub scout badges on his sweater

    Chorus
    He's just a feeling you ignore, a dumb computer hacker
    Trash can on the floor, a pitiful disaster
    Cried to sleep at night when he never got it right
    Cos he never realised it doesn't even matter
    Later on in life he's drowning in his laughter
    Three kids and a wife, his happy ever after
    Stoked to be alive with his dream job up at NASA
    Loving every day, well I guess it really pays to be a slacker

    He stays up all night playing Tetris
    Asteroids, Pac-Man, written on his games to get list
    Wasted nights spent up in his bedroom
    Tough times, long nights, must have been a lot to get through
    He's getting sharp pains in his wrist,
    In his world girlfriends don't exist,
    Can't even get an ad on Myspace

    Chorus

    He's the one all alone in despair,
    He's the one who thinks life isn't fair,
    He's the one sitting right over there.
    He's the lonely guy on the side, looking kinda shy
    You could see him ride, passing by on a pedal bike
    He's the funny type, kinda like "Napoleon Dynamite

    Chorus till end




    Submitted on 2007-06-17 10:45:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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