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Fire


Author: Roula
ASL Info:    18/female
Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 46 /64 /45
Words: 97
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Fire


The flowers bloom a day late, the sun sets too early.
There is no beauty shining through.

The spark never started a fire
So it’s time to search for new company-
I’m giving up on reason.

I’m running so fast, with no time to look back.
It’s so hard to breath, and I cannot see you anymore.

I’m feeling empty.
I’m loosing hope.

Yet as I drift farther away, I smile,
Realizing that anywhere I go,
I take you with me.

Stop and breathe.

Is it possible that you’re on fire?




Submitted on 2007-06-17 11:18:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really liked this, it was original and, I thought really sad at the same time
| Posted on 2007-06-17 00:00:00 | by Mina Liston | [ Reply to This ]


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