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    dots Submission Name: My drugdots
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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    21/F/inyour wildest dream
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 21/28/43
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy drugdots
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    You came from the shadows
    my battle scarred boy
    do you know what you do to me
    do you know your my reality.
    A little slice of heaven
    in this hell that is earth
    my pain stricken child
    I'm here for you all night

    everything will be all right.

    trust me I'll never hurt you
    and I'll love you as long as you allow
    its your say how long i stay
    and im open for you to know
    so say that you'll love me
    even through pain and tears
    and stay by my side for years.

    You are my drug
    my alchohol
    my suicidal tendency
    you are my freedom
    my heart beat
    and my addiction

    I'll never turn my back on you
    I love you through and through
    through good times and bad
    I'll stick with you
    your my light and my dark
    you make me feel my heart
    the one i thought cold and dead
    my heart in my throat
    your touch and kiss so bold

    You are my drug my lethal addiction




    Submitted on 2007-06-17 19:58:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Angel, you have a developing talent that is a delight to read!
    | Posted on 2007-06-17 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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