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    Author: Druecilla
    ASL Info:    18/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 22/26/28
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 555



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    Sheltered lives and hollow minds,

    How much simplicity can this life hold?

    Wondering thoughts and heart too heart talks,

    Complicity!

    Solem vows,

    Tyrant howls,

    Argumentive!

    A world of light and one of darkness,

    The crow watches eyes as black as the darkest abyss,

    Scapegoat!

    Silver Twilight here and there,

    As if no mortal soul will ever return,

    Sudden Death!





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      Can you feel it?
    Deep inside you.
    The words you need.
    The words that strive to be put to paper.
    Can you feel them call your name?
    I think that you can.

    I like this writing. It seems fast paced and quick to the point. Keeping track of word structure and sentence structure. Showing emotion and pictures in the mind. Simply vivid to my emotions. Lovely. Blake!!
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by deranged shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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