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    dots Submission Name: Confusiondots
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    Author: Cricket
    ASL Info:    19/F/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 81/51/27
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Random letters floating around placed in a supposed order to make up nonsense...


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    dotsConfusiondots
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    Just believe the lies dipped in raw emotion
    Don't let unwanted outcomes cause a commotion

    Words of love soaked in sarcasm
    Truth and reality to confusing to fathom

    Run for shelter there has been an outbreak
    Deafen your senses limit your intake




    Submitted on 2007-06-17 21:47:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it. its short, kind of sweet, not so simple. good work. keep posting. i hope to read more by you soon.




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    | Posted on 2007-06-18 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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