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    dots Submission Name: His Theftdots
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    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Cry until there are no more tears,
    Think of happy times to rid you of fears.
    Bleed until your arm is sore,
    Cut until you hit your core.

    Think of him to clear your mind,
    And leave your past far behind.
    Dream of him to make you glad,
    And rid you of the life you had.

    Kiss him to make you feel better,
    And read all of his sweet love letters.
    Love him until theres no love left,
    And for his heart you'll be his theft.




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