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    dots Submission Name: Stopdots
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    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       Again another old one.


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    dotsStopdots
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    Stop saying you care about me because I know that you don't,
    Stop saying that you love me because I know that you wont.
    Stop saying all these things that you know aren't true,
    Stop saying all this shit 'cause I'm done with you.

    Stop telling all these lies their confusing my brain,
    Stop telling girls you love them when you'll just put them in pain.
    Stop telling me all the things that I so long to hear,
    Stop telling me that without me you would disappear.

    Stop lying to everyone about everything that goes on,
    Stop lying to everyone and using them as your pawn.
    Stop lying and saying that you need me,
    Stop lying because everyones starting to see.




    Submitted on 2007-06-18 11:51:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this is pretty good
    yeah i hate it guys lie to you, and say that they love you, when they don't, and yeah...
    and after a while like it says in the last line, everyone does start to see
    good write

    Bella
    | Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by IsabellaAurora | [ Reply to This ]


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