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    dots Submission Name: Do You Knowdots
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    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDo You Knowdots
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    Do you know what it feels like to be alone?
    To sit there without anyone in your boring home.
    To wonder what everyones doing without you,
    To think about all the things you want to do.

    Do you know what it feels like to have a broken heart?
    To wish you never did this, that life didn't have a start.
    To wonder why this just had to happen to you,
    To think about all the things you've been through.

    Do you know what it feels like to cry all night?
    To sit there and hope that everything turns out alright.
    To wonder why you keep getting hurt,
    To think about why you get treated like dirt.

    Do you know what it feels like to cut yourself?
    To feel like your the only toy left on the shelf.
    To wonder why people made you do this,
    To think about why everything exists.




    Submitted on 2007-06-18 11:53:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      My Overall Assessment... I come to few conclusions... Well I enjoyed the fact that some one else knows what it feels like... Not sure if thatís a wonderful thing... I doubt it... You should have put everyone's instead of everyones... but thatís about it... yeah lovely write though...
    | Posted on 2007-06-19 00:00:00 | by Cricket | [ Reply to This ]


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