Description: my boyfriend is trying to tell me lately that our relationship is going down the shitter and i don't know what i can do to make things better. all i can do is cry, wait, and hope for the best..
not fair -------------------------------------------
19 months,
and now you decide
that we're not meant to be?
you should've thought of that
long before
cause now you've got my heart
and my soul
that's not fair
not fair at all
you're ripping my life in two
you can't tell me
you don't feel anything here
how could've i made
you so happy before
and now i don't excite you one bit?
you've just sucked the life
right out of me
i feel i have nothing left to live for
and these tears on my face,
oh do they burn..
aww... well i'm sure all of us girls and maybe even a few guys can relate to this ... but you need to remeber that if somethings not ment to be then its simply that. Although unforantly its not all that simple with feelings and emotions all tied up with one another. But try to look at everything encounters you as a postive thing rather than think ohh... it may be over and i'll miss him.. think yes its over but what a great time i did have with him how nice it was to share the time you did with him.. be thankfull for at least knowing for the time you have known him rather than never meeting him!... and one last thing.. everything happends for a reason and i believe when we are hurting because another has hurt us, it makes us stronger, we learn from pain and things we experince throughout life. and thanks to the fact that he may end it... you'll then have yet another chance to find your true soul mate rather than just someone whom may seem he is..
wow. i cant say i relate but if me and my guy ended it now, i would toatlly know how you feel. i do understand, dont get me wrong. ive been in relationships where they last but end. its a horrible feeling. i truly hope everything works out. omg... thats horrible to hear the things that go on in the world. broken hearts are the worst, i think, because they hit us directly. omg... keep posting. you are good.
well it will pass , trust me on that one , u just gotta think of all the bad things he done and all the good things u did and soon you'll get over him , no more tears , no more depressed poems , maybe then u can write a poem how he didn't affect ur soul ! How his absence became more joyful than his presence....Oh sorry i'm talking like u already broke up , the truth is that i think u should break up with him since the relationship as u say don't mean a thing to him ..why should it mean everything to you? I'll just wish u good luck, and as for a comment about the poem, it can be much better if u took more time on it.
Submission Name: not fair
