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    Author: just an angel
    ASL Info:    17/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 95/109/59
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsits raining, so....dots
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    Dear rain that falls
    Bringing heaven's tears
    Crash these paper-thin walls
    Soaking in my worst fears

    Dear thunder that booms
    Bringing hell's craze
    Shake these deaf rooms
    Reveal your powerful ways

    Dear lightening that strikes
    Bringing mortality's fate
    A soul goes to its like
    It will rise or desecrate

    Coming swift and fast
    You know its never meant to last




    Submitted on 2007-06-18 12:42:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Neat, nifty and very spooky stuff here...nicely put together with some fine rhyme and meter...short but potent piece of poetry ... bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-06-18 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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