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    dots Submission Name: yadada BYE BITCH!!!dots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 546
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1488



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       yadada BYE to all those other bitches thinkin they got more fucking game than i do, or they're doing more than me. or they got more. get the fuck away from me. im fucking doing it. earning more blood shed cash than any of you. and you know what?! i do got the fucking scars to prove it!!! and the money!!! so fuck you all. i can do by myself if i need to. but i dont feel like it.


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    dotsyadada BYE BITCH!!!dots
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    i do the Dew
    cuz thats what it dew
    yadada DOO
    all over the moon
    got me so high
    all the time
    i stay so fly
    so high
    in outer space
    stay outta my place
    never doin things right
    but always stay tight
    always stay low
    always got doe
    gotta get more
    got mad flow
    put on a show
    while you on the side
    hop out your ride
    yadada BYE!!!
    you think your fly
    dont cry
    cuz you aint high
    do it right
    you'll get by
    what you cant buy
    i already got
    stay off my shit dont get shot
    dont get knocked
    keep my game on lock
    stay away from the flock
    do my own thing
    yadada MEAN?!
    yadada SCREAM
    at your ho
    for what she dont know
    she's gotta go
    cuz she's so broke
    just like you
    you aint cool
    im so through
    fuck your weak ass game
    you so tame
    im so wild
    i got more style
    than your fool child
    and your so vile
    but my teams got work everywhere
    all the peoples stare
    but we on your block
    this shit dont stop
    we on top
    we at the party startin shit
    throwing hits
    stayin fit
    im doing it
    and your mad
    cuz i just started and got more
    than you ever had
    im bad
    so much more than a fleeting fad




    Submitted on 2007-06-18 16:50:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..HA.....ha..haha......(wipes tear from eye)....i'd like to hear this as a rap song some day. hehe. nice pic.
    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! this is long. are you just venting or what?
    It sounds like something you needed to get out of your system. Or mayby its just me.


    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2007-06-19 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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