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    dots Submission Name: Foreignerdots
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    Author: tagit
    ASL Info:    36 - Male - Canada
    Elite Ratio:    6.67 - 48/48/35
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 334



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    A brown eye apparently is
    Jealous of one contacted blue

    Blonde locks dyed are coveted
    By tresses rich with mahogany

    That an oval unblemished skin
    So fair be tinged so easily green

    Speaks of sad misapprehended
    Words held too tight to scream





    Submitted on 2007-06-18 18:27:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      seems like the piece should be entitled "Racist", or change first word last line to "world".
    | Posted on 2007-06-18 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]



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