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    dots Submission Name: Only Yourself To Blamedots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Her skin will never feel this way
    Her lips won't taste the same
    Her heart will never beat for you
    You've only yourself to blame.

    Her smile will never light up the room
    The way mine used to do
    She'll never be the kind of woman
    Who perfectly complements you

    Her eyes won't make your heart skip a beat
    Her laugh won't make you grin
    Her touch won't fulfill your every desire
    And you'll long for me again

    I'll never touch you like I once did
    You'll never hear me scream your name
    Good luck learning to cope with that sense of loss
    You've only yourself to blame.




    Submitted on 2007-06-18 19:15:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW... this poem was very well written. i loved it. i am currently going through a break up with my boyfriend, and this is everything i've wanted to say to him. well done girl!

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    ~mag
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by Magger32 | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't comment on this because I can't get the notion of TONY and that's not cool. you are the [censored] with rhymes. its so realtionshippy, and I dont like that.
    | Posted on 2007-06-19 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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