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    dots Submission Name: naked in the bluish hoursdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsnaked in the bluish hoursdots
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    who amongst us could give over
    to the sociopathic fingers
    of gypsie thieves?

    & i have seen such standing waves
    of miraculous flowers
    towering over all of our heads,
    which are the steeples of people

    the beauty of living everyday
    is that you are in it
    and its plush textures
    can be the skins delight

    these days
    when the harshness of the wind
    adores us

    i contemplate how i've known
    no other pleasure
    as the honeyed tongues lament
    naked in the bluish hours
    of my existence




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