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    dots Submission Name: Rambledots
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    Author: October_s Child
    ASL Info:    19/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 16/13/12
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 517



    Description:
       Written in 2002

    it's actually just 2 little rambling thoughts that popped into my head and I jotted them down and then later stuck them together


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    I'm just like them..
    I'm just like them but not the same.
    fuck you, I'm just like them..
    I'm just like them but not in a good way..

    You are so pretty
    when you look down on me
    sometimes it's stupid
    we're not free
    you are such a soothing pain for me.

    You are so pretty
    when you smile at me
    it's something to look at
    you should laugh at least
    you are such a soothing pain for me




    Submitted on 2007-06-19 00:27:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good, although the beginning kinda seemed schitzo, I suppose im not one to be talking. well written, not one of your better ones though
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by Apple-Man | [ Reply to This ]



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